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Wednesday, November 27, 2019

My Amazing story web

Hey bloggers
During reading we were reading Ballet and the story, was about that Robert was going to ballet and his friends too. The story is about Robert and his friends. And other people were being mean and saying that balla sucks.

We had to learn about having settings,outcome,characters, action.

What did you find that you liked in my story. I found this easy because all the stuff was in the story.

Do you like my writing? rate this out of 1 to 10.







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  1. AnonymousNovember 28, 2019 at 9:28 AM

    Hello Alex
    I like how you explained about what the story is about Robert and his friends like doing ballet. You need to fix up your spelling on the first sentence.Why were people making fun of Robert and his friends? Out of 10 I give you a... 5.5 From Xavier STB RM 3.

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  2. AnonymousDecember 9, 2019 at 2:54 PM

    Hello Alex
    I like how you explained about what the story is about Robert and his friends like doing ballet. You need to fix up your spelling on the first sentence.Why were people making fun of Robert and his friends? Out of 10 I give you a... 5.5 From Xavier STB RM 3.

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