Thursday, October 31, 2019
My writing about the water park
This is my writing about, writing my water park. I written my writing. and I used my hearing,looking, what I see and what I feel
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Hi Alex!
ReplyDeleteI like how you added a topic for each slide.
I could hear the same thing as you (people screaming)
Can You do it on a doc next time? because It dose not play.
Hi Alex!
ReplyDeleteI like that you rote them in sentances.
I also did water play writing.
By Sonny.
Hi Alex
ReplyDeleteI like how you added detail like you see the water splashing on the ground. But it does not makes sentence so please fix that. There's lots of detail but not as much. From RM 3 Xavier STB