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Sunday, April 5, 2020

Writing about the Mud volcano/holiday writing

How to find Mud volcano?

If you want to find a mud volcano, you need to find Yellowstone like deep mines because you can’t find them on the ground like rock. they are deep and underground, if you find a yellow stone you will know that you're close to a Mud Volcano. 


Some miners already found Mud volcano and you can go to one and take pictures. But you’re not allowed to take pets and any animal, and you can go there anytime you want to because they are open all day long.

Where can Mud Volcano be found?

They can be found in Russia. The Russia's mud volcano they have not erupted in 10 years now, Russia's Mud Volcano has exploded.

Today I was writing about Mud Volcano and if you readed my writing you will find the information that I was talking about.

What do you think about my writing?
Can you please rate it and put your ratings in the comments

BYE

2 comments:

  1. Hi Alex, I found your topic interesting and I am going to find out more about it especially what made Russia's mud volcano explode. Next time you might like to list your source or provide a link to it so I can see what one looks like. I like your writing as a blog that shares information by putting questions to think about and then providing answers. Based on this I would rate it a very good pass. Ka pai Alex.
    Mr Matai

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  2. Hi Alex
    I liked reading about the mud volcano. Can you tell me what part of world the miners are when they found a mud volcano?. I would like to know more information on this could you provide more detail or a link I could go to?? Keep up the good writing.
    Miss Rader

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