Thursday, August 8, 2019
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Hi I'm Mark, from St. Bernadette's School. I like the way you wanted to persuade Mr. Norman which is our principal, that we should make Room 8 a gaming room so we could have fun playing while having a break.
ReplyDeleteThis Reminded me of when I also wanted to have a time where we could play or do stuff on our Chromebooks.
Maybe you should add more reasons what work you guys are tired of, because maybe they could just change the subject to something even better.
Mark
Kind Regards
Thank you for talling me that.
DeleteYou told me to change my subject
bye Mark
from Alex
Kia Ora Alex,
ReplyDeleteI like your Piece of Persuavsive writing I think it is very descriptive and I like your reason because its like you are adding facts so I thought that was pretty cool. next time you could add why you are tired of work and maybe you could change the spelling because I didn't understand some of the reasons.
Kind Regards,
Manuk